Friday, November 21, 2008

Chapter 1


Jon strolled around humming to himself. He was on a Greek island of Santorini. He had not been here in twenty years. Here he met somebody, somebody special, somebody he loved and still did love, somebody who made him feel...amazing. In fact he was invited here to her daughters wedding, he couldn't wait to see her, to kiss her, to hold her again. He had waited far too long to come back. Jon's thoughts were interrupted by music and shouting. He looked around and saw he had walked into some body's party. He quickly turned around and walked out.


He strolled over to the docks and looked down at the clear blue water. He took off his shirt and pants, but left on his boxers, and jumped in. He stayed under the water for as long as he could, thinking of twenty years ago when he was here with Adara. He remembered after they had made love for the first time, when she told him what her name meant; beauty, virgin. He laughed, she definitely not a virgin after he was finished with her. He got up onto the decking and saw he had a few admirers. Jon gave them a breathtaking smile. One of the girls ran over and hugged him. Jon laughed then put his arms around her, she handed him a piece of paper and a pen. 'What's your name?' he asked her 'Sophia' she replied, Jon signed the piece of paper. She ran off to show her friends, they all looked over at him, then ran away excitedly.


Jon stood there, water dripping from his body, he soaked up the sun for a few minutes. He then looked for his clothes, they weren't there. He looked around and saw somebody standing looking at him, with his clothes in their hands.

2 comments:

koolsheena said...
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koolsheena said...

Your story sounds great so far! :)

Going to read the next chapter now.